Dear John.
How are you? On 25 of Feb.Our from teacher,Ms.Lee,bought us to the Old Ford Factory and Budit Chandu for learning Journey.We told a bus there about 20 minutes,I could readed a lot of the memories and reflections of the hardships faced by those who lived through the darkest years of Singapore's modern history have been captured befittingly at the old Ford Motor Factory.I learned reativity, adaptability and entrepreneurship from the annals of history in the Old Ford Factory.After that,we went to the Syonan Garden.Where was the “backyard” of Memories.The quiet garden that exudes quaint, old-fashioned charm, was a unique feature of the exhibition. i found some assortment of “food crops” that were widely grown during the Occupation. Tapioca, sweet potato, yam, banana, coconut, pineapple and rice .What i learned was each of these crops were storyboards that reveals the ingenious ways in which people used these crops to fight hunger, malnutrition and diseases.
Hi Benson,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you have read up some material to help you write your email better. It would be better if you included what you personally have learnt and what you felt about the experience. How about your trip to BT Chandu? It was not mentioned in the email and there was no clear ending. Is it still incomplete??
Do add on what key messages and lessons learnt about Singapore at the end of your email to let your cousin have a better idea of your learning journey. Work on it!
OK...Thank you Ms Lee.
ReplyDeleteYO!!!!BEN!!!!!!
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